Script & storyboards

The script has been semi-extensively re-written as the ending has completely changed, and other ideas and tidbits have been peppered about. I'm still worried that its not that funny though. The script runs at around 95 pages now.

As I'm storyboarding I'm changing the script, as when you have to visually think about things in order to draw them, parts of the script end up not making sense, so you have to figure it out, storyboard it, then re-write the wording in script. There is a rough 2 minute animatic of the first scene cut together, and the next scene is nearly finished.

Storyboard for Scene 1, Shot 1